Getting there Ciara, In your mirror shot your mirror is to gray! and need more fall off in tone. To do this you need to adjust the light on the bounce card that the mirror is seeing. Increase the power of the light by 1/2 stop and use a grid to accomplish fall off in tone. Remember to adjust exposure for your grid. Crop in on mirror or make the shot more dynamic either with composition, props or additional light...
In both your high key and low key glass images you are loosing the edges of the glass on the background. Use cards to hold edges. Black cards on the high key white on the low key. If you are, move them closer to the edge, if you cut into the frame then move them toward the background and make them bigger. Your color image is the best.
Getting there Ciara,
ReplyDeleteIn your mirror shot your mirror is to gray! and need more fall off in tone. To do this you need to adjust the light on the bounce card that the mirror is seeing. Increase the power of the light by 1/2 stop and use a grid to accomplish fall off in tone. Remember to adjust exposure for your grid.
Crop in on mirror or make the shot more dynamic either with composition, props or additional light...
In both your high key and low key glass images you are loosing the edges of the glass on the background. Use cards to hold edges. Black cards on the high key white on the low key. If you are, move them closer to the edge, if you cut into the frame then move them toward the background and make them bigger.
Your color image is the best.